Saturday, April 3, 2010

Something like love?

A sweet smile to welcome you,
a cute frown to admonish you,
So chirpy when you do something for her,
And when she is unhappy,its one hell of a bother!

You would do anything for that smile,
You would miss her dearly,even if its for a while,
You would leave nothing to wipe out that frown off her pretty face,
And your heart just warms up at her unending grace....

Don't know what she talks about,but who cares?
As long as you can listen to whatever she shares,
She always seems to be one step ahead of you in everything,
Doesn't matter,she is with you,that is the important thing.

Its like the world gone wrong when she is sad,
Her sadness drives you mad,
And if she is the one gone mad with fury...
Well,its a never ending story :D

Its so irritating when she scolds and bosses over you,
But its better to listen to the advices she showers on you,
Whatever she says,has something that sets you thinking,
Yeah right! You aren't going to follow,that's another thing! :P

But whatever the place,whatever the time,
I would like to specifically mention in these rhymes,
Perhaps a heartbreak may follow,perhaps a bitterness may be the result,
In the end,I guess its worth it to fall in love with a girl.


Endless phone calls till he gets a response,
Some extra attention is all that he wants,
He would call back shamelessly when one has angrily disconnected,
And would go on saying sorry till the apology is accepted..

He is miserable when one is not around,
One makes him miserable when one is really around,
Would never understand when one expresses her feelings,
But nevertheless,he behaves as if he is listening!

Would criticize the person whom one appreciates,
Feels jealous often,and an issue out of nothing he creates,
Cares,but never expresses the right way,
But something is not right when he has got nothing to say...

His silence hurts,his anger scares,
And in his bad moods one never dares,
To say anything or to console or convince,
Frankly,advices make him wince!

When he is upset,the world doesn't matter anymore,
One does everything to see his magical smile once more,
Somehow with soft words he resumes his merriment,
But,for that,one does not get any acknowledgment!

But whatever the outcome,whoever he chooses later,
The care and the emotions are embedded forever,
He may betray,shattering her world,
But,its really beautiful when a boy is loved by a girl...


  1. Omg that was so damn cuuute :)
    So well written yaa!

  2. its really a sweet poem i love the rhymes~!!! :D

    check out my latest post if you're ain't busy~ :3

  3. Very nice poem....with excellent flow of emotions and's really nice.
    keep it up...

  4. So cute.........
    So true...........

  5. Wow..what a story in well narrated that I could even imagine the visuals!

    Simply awesome and well written!!

    ~Keep the Spark Alive..

  6. @Ayu
    Thank you...and yeah I checked out your post :)

    Thank you :)

    Thank you so much :)

    Thank you so much :)

  7. The only word I can say is, "Sweet"
    This poem has the unique soul, could relate the first part well :P

    Awesome poem!

  8. hmmm i rememeber the endless fonecalls :D

  9. आपकी लिखी हुई कवितायें पढ़कर आनंद आ जाता है.

  10. anu yaar its just amazing... i also do writ some poems bt nt so wel as dis.... its just fantastic... u r awe.. yaar... a grt poet.. an i guess uts ur experienc whic speaks... ha ha jus kidding.. anyways hw r u able to writ suc beautiful poems...???


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