Monday, September 21, 2009

Even I loved someone....

Note:
I had forgotten about this poem of mine....until I read Ekam's new post!Okay...Here we go...


Fresh flowers bloom each day,
Beautifying my way,
The sunrise brings a new dawn,
But something inside me has gone...

Something inside me has gone,
Outside,everything is fine,but inside something is terribly wrong,
There is a strange fear,a strange insecurity,
The times seem to go on and on for eternity...

The times seem to go on and on for eternity,
There always persists a feeling of self-pity,
My story is known to no one,
Even I loved someone....

Even I loved someone,
And it was not just for some silly fun,
I loved him with all my heart and soul,
He made my life meaningful....

He made my life meaningful,
All those times when we were together were so wonderful,
I still love him,and would do so till the end,
Even though he lies somewhere,dead....

Even though he lies somewhere,dead,
I am glad he died a valiant death,
I visit him each day with flowers for his lonely grave,
But I feel proud,yes,he had been brave...

I feel proud,yes,he had been brave,
Everyone tells me to forget him and welcome each new day,
And although the sunrise brings a new dawn,
But something inside me has forever gone...

14 comments:

  1. i can very well identify with d pain of separation..after being carried out into those moments by ekam's post..this is an anothr press on my nerve..bt a butiful poem..!!

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  2. I can very well relate to this. Losing someone special is the worst chapter of anybody's life.
    Life moves on but still it somehow stops at that moment when you lose someone.

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  4. Beautiful poem. If words are honey, your poem is the sweetest honey i ever tasted :)

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  5. very emotional poem... the way u show ur feelings and expressions is very extraordinary...

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  6. @Anu

    Sighs! But it is good to see someone take feelings so deep down in a world of whirlwind affairs and forgotten friendship.

    As for letting go and forgetting, don't be pressured by the external world. A time will come and you will prolly realise it. But if the memories give you inspiration and encouragement and do not fetter your work and life, you can continue to savour them forEVER is what I will say.

    It is a beautiful beautiful poem... I loved the refrains, the free unartificial style and all.

    Keep writing... and may the sunshine go with you! :)

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  7. ""I visit him each day with flowers for his lonely grave,
    But I feel proud,yes,he had been brave""
    wow!!
    Amazing poem!! Amazing yaar!

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  8. Anu banu...
    another great work...
    nice use of techniques...
    last line of previous para becomes 1st line of new para....
    keep up the good work..
    [:)]

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  9. That was sad and tragic.
    "Even though he lies somewhere,dead,
    I am glad he died a valiant death,"
    Whoa, these lines were pretty graphic.
    Beautiful one, and I never even guessed that you could write poems like this!

    Cheers!

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  10. @ ANU
    Very well written, it almost rolled down tear on my cheek!

    :)

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  11. @Pawan
    Thank you.:)

    @Rachana
    Thank you:):)

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  12. First time drooping by...
    Lovely Blog u have.. :)
    Mesmerizing and captivating poem.. :)
    Loved the poem.. :)
    Cheers!!

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